Dear Kylie,
I think that you participate in the class a lot and I feel that you know what is going on in the class most of the time. But participation isn’t everything. I think that when you are writing your essays you seem just to plow through it and not elaborate on some of the topics that you feel are more important to you. I know who you are through your first 2 essays, but after that I lost who you were as a person. You should take more time to reevaulate your essays and the time that is spent on working with your essays. You have helped me to make this class more fun with your ridic antics and your bubbly personality.
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